💥!THIS IS SAD WRITING!💥

Kia Ora, This week our learning intention was to deepen our understanding of descriptive language by creating feelings for our reader, such as empathy. We also looked into the effects of short sentences. 

My soul starts to go deeper and deeper into my body as  the gloomy feeling of sadness starts to grow. The pain and fear wants to escape, through my red eyes, leaving a trail of tears behind. I take one last look at Charlie. I can’t help myself. I start to tear up as the pain in the dog’s eyes grow. I look down and I see a small puddle of water underneath me. I look back up as my tears trickle down my face. I see the pain in the dog's eyes. she slowly drifts away in sorrow. My heart stops for a second as I took in the last moment of our friendship. I remember all the times she had been mischievous, silly and crazy. I regret all the times I had yelled. Suddenly her heart rate drops, and I am left with nothing but my emptiness and my broken heart.